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for Hot Wax and Lube

by demonwing12846

person smalvina
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor jou, or should i say poor seto?
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! this was funny! I liked the end^^
person tash1021
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was good but short... i like it though:)
person Destry
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a good idea and well-written. However, it seemed short. I think you could have done a lot more with it. (: