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for When spells go wrong

by mariktower23

person tash1021
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing u have to continue
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just one thing

you may need to proof read cause there was some terrible mishaps in your senteces and the fact is their names are
Malik (hikari) Marik(Yami)

Just so you know cause your story is good
but its hard to concentrate to it

hope to read more