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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this is really good! and sad though....
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, what a silly mistake. And I can't believe I never noticed it.
Anyway, I'm glad you all liked the story. And I hope you don't cry too much. But I've always found a good cry was useful, now and then. :D
Anyway, I'm glad you all liked the story. And I hope you don't cry too much. But I've always found a good cry was useful, now and then. :D
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was wonderful. I cried so much and still am, but it was just so...so crying sorry um can't think of the word. There was one mistake though you meant to write desendent not ancester I know I mispelled the words but you understand. I loved it and it touched my heart more than anything I've read in a long time or watched. I may simply cry myself to sleep. I too almost cried when the last episode was one but my brother and mother kept bothering me at the end, but later that day I did cry when alone. I think it was Yugi who was the old man. Well thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing such a wonderful story still crying. Thank you.
Butterfly Beauty
Butterfly Beauty
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I enjoyed the introspection mixed in with his memories. And you did a wonderful job of keeping the identity secret. I honestly didn't know for sure who it was until Yami spoke. Thanks for sharing!
'Ko
'Ko
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. It made me cry. I hated the way the series ended and I'm glad Yuugi got to finally be with his friends.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok...i cryed man. that was sooo beautiful. i jus had to wipe a tear. this was really good.