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for The Wild

by hatochiisai

schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this chapter with baby hybrids is too adorable more please
person Inigeshi
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo I just caught up, its good to see you updated and i love the hbrids as kids especialy bakura with his little grape episode. i used to do that wit h my puppy and his treats he'd get excited then when he couldn't find hem he'd get dejected and sulk (i felt like such an asshole for that) it was adoreable! I cant wait for your next update and hope it comes quickly.
person silverwolfe
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was the most adorable thing I have ever read in my life!! It was so cute, and just picturing Yami with the puppy eyes...SO CUUUTE!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter of fluffy cuteness!
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story and your other hybrid stories I laugh and cry during your stories the stories are so well written


MORE PLEASE!!
person Calcifer
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol. That last bit with the lake was hilarious. You can't have a visit to Scotland with out mention of the loch ness monster. It'd be like Peanut butter and jelly without the bread. Sticky... Or not. That was a good line though. I lol'd at that.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel
person Inigeshi
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man it's been a while since i've read any fics thank you for updating. I feel bad for poor marik in all honesty it seems like every one is ganging up on him. i understand about the anger issues and the juvenile behavior but how can you really be an adult when you never had a proper role model or learn how? Well i cant wait for your update and wish you much success on this story.
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! You rock! I felt bad for poor marik. All sexually frustrated and angry :( I'm sure once he releases his tensions he'll be ok ^_^
person Calcifer
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's pretty depressing. Marik almost getting sent home.

Excellent work though, keep it up.

~Angel
person Calcifer
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful writing. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

~Angel
person Drago
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you are alive! I thought you died! I thought this chapter was cute! I loved it!