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I just read all of the Trilogy and it was so good! I seriously love you for writing this. You actually made me like the prospect of hybrids! And the story itself is so amazing. I love the characters and all of your original ones are so awesome… especially Rem. Please continue this soon! I don't want the tale of Marik, Ryou, Malik and Bakura to end so soon!

Awww Ryou is taking such good care of Marik. It's so sweet, and they got home!!! *confetti*!!!

YAY! New chapter**dances** Poor sick lion, how long do pneumonia last? Never had it myself.....I need some wood and fast I don't wanna be sick T-T
J-chan

I'll bet Ren will be ecstatic to see them! and if Yami and Mokuba can become friends I know that Seto would really love it. Poor Malik and Bakura, But they WERE asking for it. hope they get to have fun at their own house. I'm glad everyone is growing up and getting back to normal (as normal for them anyway) and if Marik and Ryou DO find the island again, I'm sure that Seto and Pegasus will have a thing or two to say about how their pets were stolen. What that lady is doing isn't remotely legal even if she does think she's doing the right thing. I'm glad you updated, I've missed this story! ^_^

YAY! new chapter!
I love malik he's so sweet and driven, i'm going to go re read!
Can't wait for the next chapter
DJ

I swear this is the only story on the net that has made me like Marik.

AWWW this chapter was really cute! I hope they can get off the island safely. Although, if hot headed Marik had maybe been thinking a little better he would have tried to find a phone and called either Pegasus or Kaiba and let them track the call while no one knew he was in the house before he went and rescued Ryou. So then people would know they were alive, relatively safe, and also have a better chance of being found. Maybe even get the woman busted for kidnapping people and dragging them to her island. But Ryou is right, Marik isn't known for really thinking things through, and it would most likely affect whatever plans you have for the plot. I enjoy this story so much, I can't wait to see what else you have planned for it!

Oh thank god! I had started to think you'd abandoned the fic! *hugs* I love this story

this chapter is awesomesauce, but you need to go back through the last third or so of the chapter. a whole bunch of text is written out like this:

Ahmose Inarus: "Angel is beautiful." Spunky said softly, licking her cheek. "VERY beautiful."

Konekomallychan: Angel frowned slightly. 'Why did you do this for me?' she asked, uncovering her face. 'I've been nothing but mean to you...'

Ahmose Inarus: Spunky stared at her. "I love you." He said, nuzzling her.


which made for rather confused reading. But I loved the chapter and I'm glad they have grown a bit. Oh I hope that Ryou will still want to see Marik after that awful time last time. And would the pride REALLY accept them. literally asking Ryou to go into the lion's den with that one. can't wait to see how it turns out!

I always feel so sorry for Marik, he always gets the short end of the stick, no matter what, and Ryou always ends up bleeding. It would be highly entertaining if during the lion festival, Marik suddenly ages enough to go seek Ryou out on his own. where the heck are they now where hybrids hunt hybrids? have they completely forgotten the fact they are human and just given in to their animal instincts?