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by Pane

schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It seemed a bit rushed from lack of punctuation, but I understood it just fine. This sounds like you could make this into an interesting fic indeed! Can't wait for the next update!
person Jenivi7
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, a summer story! hehe it was short, but that's forgivable. What, it being a prologue and all. Please continue XD
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story! I look forward to new updates!
person tinkletimekelly
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good. Don't know yet. I'm looking for a good summer fic. Is this one it ???????????????????????? Looking forward to your next chapter.
person hakoro
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow Im likin it so far! Keep it up! update soon k?
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like it! i hope you continue! ryou is my all time favorite! please update soon!

~Fly~
person tash1021
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its great please continue soon

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