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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. Its really great at the moment.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i love it
more more more^.^
more more more^.^
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay! Now update.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! This seems like its going to be a great fic! It sounds a bit rushed, but thats ok.
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shudders...* I've been in Ryou's position before... IN Hawaii as a matter of fact... No one saw me get pulled out, but then my dad happened to notice I was missing and luckily he saved me. There was no life guard on duty there either. And by completely lucky chance, my cousin had taught me how to body surf the DAY before. That was the ONLY way I managed to get over close enough to some rocks so my Dad could grab me.
*shudders again*.. It's been about 18 years since that happened and I can still remember everything like it happened just yesterday..
*shudders again*.. It's been about 18 years since that happened and I can still remember everything like it happened just yesterday..
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really have me attention now. This is seems that it will be fun to read. I can't wait to see more.
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really loved this chapter! whats going to happen next? please update soon!
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I calmly await your update... I love surfers so have fun writing +_+
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... this is going to interesting and hilarious. I can't WAIT to see what you have up your diabolical sleeves. Please add more soon. :3
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story isn't bad, I like it, but it would help if you got yourself a beta. That way there wouldn't be as many spelling and grammar errors, and you wouldn't forget most of the '.' and the ',' ... sorry if I sound bitchy, the story looks interesting, keep it up, but check your grammar please >_< .. ^_^