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Wow that was good, and I'm not normally a reader of this pairing. Are you going to continue? Make a sequel? Whenever I see a oneshot I always come up with possibilities for a multi-chaptered stories...you email me if you make any progress, okay?
ReaperRain

Lol you should definitly make this into a story instead of an oneshot. This one left me wanting for more :)

Loved it :) A sequel would be darling, but even without, it was such a good oneshot.

ohh great story! I really hope to see another chapter soon =]

I'm sorry you are so ill but out of your illness was born a very interesting story! I especially liked your pun about Ryou sucking before the story got underway... how appropriate. And speaking of poor Ryou... man, his life really blows - how's that for a pun? Free of charge even! I thought the story was set up well. Ryou doing his "duty". The silence during the act itself with his master must not have been out of the ordinary. Wow. I'll bet The Thief King was rather surprised to get an added bonus to his other loot! I found it interesting that the emotion that Ryou felt after the fact was shame - a feeling that you had mentioned he had managed to swallow long ago (another horrible pun but it seems I'm on a roll... God help us.). So why did he feel shame? I'd love to know. I would love to see a sequel to this because it leaves a lot of open questions and lots of possibilities. Maybe the TK revisits the abode to steal away yet another treasure in the form of a white-haired slave he can't live without? If Ryou is going to be forced to do the deed, at least have him giving it up to some form of Bakura! ; ) Nicely done and get better soon!