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for Dealing With Departure

by DarknessOfEgypt

schedule December 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You have a very nice beginning, but it's just that: a beginning. Please continue this promising story.
person 3334
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I was wondering though, could you continue it? When I finished reading what you posted, I got the sense that it wasn't finished. I would love to know what happens after the last scene! Great job and I hope you continue it!
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry you lost you friend. The story is really good. Is the note from the Ishtar's.
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neat! Are you planning to continue with this? It kinda sounds like it was meant to be a oneshot. It would be a really good as a longer fic
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah sorry, forget the last review, had a blonde moment and didn't see the "ONESHOT" note. Good fic though, sorry about your friend
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH...this was fantastic. And it leaves SO much open. It is not only closure but a new beginning. If you don't continue it may I adopt the bunny? It is...haunting.

Shelly
person tavia454
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snif! That was so sad. I can relate too. Once you lose someone who was a part of your group, you never forget them totally. There will always be something that will remind you of them, even if it is just the smallest thing, like a scent or a the color of something that you see. Very well written.

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