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for Jou Cool

by undercoverme

schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GYYYAAAHHHH!!! Why do you have to stop there!!! T____T Poor Jou... *pets his head* Make him better... damn it
person lokivsanubis
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your fanfic. Its great. Otogi works so fast and moves quick. I love Jou/Seto's relationship. The Party's going to be a "Mixer" alright. Can't wait to read it. Update SOoon!!!!
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. It's different than anything I've read in a long while. I really hope to see an update soon, the first two chapters were great and I'd love to read more!
person Wicabeth
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*mind explodes yet again at the vibrator* XD
person js
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its i really good story...i like it
update soon
person Wicabeth
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the coming chapters *^-^* I still giggle and drool when I read them.
person Kalico
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty interesting. A bit rushed but still a pretty good pace. I would like to see more from you.
person Sammei
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey wow, I'm really liking where this story is going! I'm really curious about this whole "job" thing Honda keeps mentioning. And, in this kind of story, I would probably think that Kaiba's the one trying to "go straight," what with his CEO image, and Jou would be the one who was pursuing. But this is a really great way to do it. I can't wait to see what happens at this mixer. Uh, I don't suppose you could tell me around how many parts this fic has? Just curious. ^_^ I've always been a fan of Honda and Otogi together, so I hope that pair works out, as well. Great job, and I'll be eagerly waiting for your next update!
person catti
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you done with"The Offer?"....Not saying this one isnt appreciated...it has potential...but feel that that "The Offer" is left hanging...its me...its a mental thing...really..Im in counseling..I swear...We are working on it...laughs...catti