AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Jou Cool

by undercoverme

person Wicabeth
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chanting* Limo scene, limo scene, limo scene

XD Yes, I'm impatient
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Jounouchi thought of sending Mai and keeping the others safe. That was a great idea to help those kids stay safe and happy. It gives them a chnce to really live their lives in a normal manner. Great chapter.
person lokivsanubis
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!!! Update soon. I have one question though, did you ever update on The Offer? i was just wondering if that ended yet.
person MikaSamu
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Terrific chapter in so many ways: Jou willing to take a chance with Seto, and understanding the pain he gave him; Seto's confrontation with Noa; and best of all the plan developed that gives hope. Wonderful!
person Scarlet Goddess
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Agh! Where is the last chapter?!?!? I love it so much!!!!
person jessiemay
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far I have been very impressed with this story, please finish it.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter! And I agree with Yugi, Seto needs to get laid. I'm getting more and more hooked on this story with every chapter. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Wicabeth
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dances* I know what's gonna happen neeeeeext =D

And I liiiiiiike it =DD
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please!
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope Jou's plan works. If not, it is apt to get messy.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?