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for Jou Cool

by undercoverme

person Wicabeth
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chanting* Limo scene, limo scene, limo scene

XD Yes, I'm impatient
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Jounouchi thought of sending Mai and keeping the others safe. That was a great idea to help those kids stay safe and happy. It gives them a chnce to really live their lives in a normal manner. Great chapter.
person lokivsanubis
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!!! Update soon. I have one question though, did you ever update on The Offer? i was just wondering if that ended yet.
person MikaSamu
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Terrific chapter in so many ways: Jou willing to take a chance with Seto, and understanding the pain he gave him; Seto's confrontation with Noa; and best of all the plan developed that gives hope. Wonderful!
person Scarlet Goddess
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Agh! Where is the last chapter?!?!? I love it so much!!!!
person jessiemay
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far I have been very impressed with this story, please finish it.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter! And I agree with Yugi, Seto needs to get laid. I'm getting more and more hooked on this story with every chapter. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Wicabeth
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dances* I know what's gonna happen neeeeeext =D

And I liiiiiiike it =DD
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please!
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope Jou's plan works. If not, it is apt to get messy.