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for Jou Cool

by undercoverme

schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOO!! You just had to stop right when it was getting good! That was evil! Oh well, it was a great chapter anyway, please update soon! Pretty please, I need more!
person Jerica
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What are they going to do? How is the deal going to go down? What about Otigo and Honda?
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Jounouchi got his deal with the cops. Honda is hooked and doesn't realise it yet. I wonder what made Seto change his mind. This is really great!
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay this is a review for AFF.net :P

Darling, you are a tease. First, I have to admit what interest me more are your ideas on how to change the world and your personal views on homosexuality. In this story, you project them but at the same time making the character feel it. You choose them well.

Also, why di Kaiba stopped in chapter number 7? I feel something more about that ....
person girlo
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LITLLE BABY DOLL!!!! *coddle coddle* shhhhhh, everything's gonna be ok.

Ummm, erm, I mean... good chapter, everyone was happy!
person Wicabeth
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can go be happy and work on my story now that we've gotten my favorite scene out of the way *^-^*
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please!
person em
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was my fav chap
person lokivsanubis
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Many, Seto has a secret. I want to know more. Great chapter. Update soon.
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm so glad they got together, please update soon.