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for Jou Cool

by undercoverme

person lokivsanubis
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Update soon.
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm happy that everything is okay between them now. Please update soon, I need another fix soon!
person Wicabeth
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Freckle *^-^*
person digiditz
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one. Good job. I hope you are nothing like me and plan to finish this story or else I'm gonna have to cry.
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm reallu sorry to see this end but I am glad that there was a happy ending. This story was brilliant. It seems the talent runs in the family.
person girlo
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, everyhitng worked out for everyone. I love it when that happens.... Good job!
person Buho
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg I loved the story!!!!! I am being please for a spin off with Otogi and Honda, and one of Noa and Mokuba. I just loved how you were developing the bond between each and I want to know more. Please write spin offs.
person catti
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW...no actual sex in this one either...hmmm....now that this one is done...are you going to finish The Offer?...and will there be actual sex in that one?...catti
person Usagi-san
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goddess, I love this story!!! Jou is so macho, and his linguistics are perfect! I enjoyed the way you tied Noa in with this and Seto's reaction to his brother. Not to mention the more orignial death sequence for Gozaboro... Don't even get me started about the freckle, although I'm kinda curious how a man would get one freckle on a part of the body that should always be covered. If you figure it out, let me know 'cause I have one on the inside of my big toe since I was about three... Anyways I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!


Usagi-san
person geekinbandtees
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ilovethisiloethisilovethisilovethis!! Gods...*pass out* this ficcy is : awesome