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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and very orginal too! A very interesting little game they played there! Perhaps you could do another chapter to this? I would love to see what happens after the lights go out! If you do then maybe you could mix the yami's and hikari's up a little? They don't always need to be with their other halves! xD Overall, good fic, nice to see something different for a change! ^_~
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice...can you let me know when you get any of your other fics up on here? My email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good story... you should continue it more... or try with diffrent characters... but you need to go further... make things interesting ;)