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for Cool Seduction

by MidnightFantasy

schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh... now we all know about Malik's ice cube fetish... and what he does with it in his spare time. ;) Great story. I especially liked that someone else thinks that Ryou looks like a little kitty!
person Gantaeno
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have actually already read this and enjoyed it, but I thought I'd drop you a line to thank you for finding those fics for me: I can't believe I couldn't get them myself! I'd searched both 'dancing' and 'pet', but only in summary... typical!

Thank you very much!

I do like your Malik/Ryou take, so if you author any more, let me know first!
person Jenivi7
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe! ok, ok i'll review :p wonderfully hot and yummy and even though it's a pairing i don't normally ship you write it very well! *gives you lots of love and a cookie*
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Very, very hot.
person Anon
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
zomg that was HOT! ^_^ i lurved it
person bakurasgirl
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reviews for Cool Seduction
bakurasgirl 2004-02-05 id # 128901
it was good, some grammar errors, but they're not bad. Good first fic!
person spiderweb
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
spiderweb 2004-02-05 id # 128918
SEXY! SEXY! SEXY! That was Great!!!! MALIKRYOU!!! YEAH!!! NIce job and begging you to keep it up!^_^
person citricacid2001
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
citricacid2001 2004-02-05 id # 128957
wow, really great fic!
interesting touch with the ice...
person Bambi
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bambi 2004-02-05 id # 129141
That was hott!! And your a brand new author, too! Let me be one of the first to welcome you to aff.net. Write more, you're talented!!

~Bambi
person Jade
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jade 2004-02-05 id # 129274
It was a neat idea with the ice, but overall it would have been a lot better if you had proofread, made them in character, and cut out all the fangirl Japanese.