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for Take Away My Pain

by MystikIvanow

schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great ending. I'm glad everything worked out. It's too bad their siblings had to die but it seems it was necessary.
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chpater. I'm glad they are healing each other.
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh this is so frickin interesting! I cant wait to read more.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really love it. I hope that second part of the heart shows soon. It is destined for them. Good chapter.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Jou and Seto. Seto is blaming himself for what happened to them. Poor guy. Jou is probably doing the same thing.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope those two will follow their hearts and stop being stupid. It was the robbers fault that they died, not Seto's and not Jounouchi's.
Poor yami is being haunted.
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds really good so far, I really like this. Please update soon!
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I think it will be good to get them together. They need each other.