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for Daddy Dragon King

by yukikoangel

person Wicabeth
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like I said on LD, I think this story is cute *^-^* And I like the letter writing style
person fiby
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... really I have to wait till next chapter? O well. I really like how your doing this all in letters so far. i think it would be a neat idea to like every five chapters to through in a narrative chapter. Or mabey that's just me. But really great start! I can't wait for your next update! LOVE!
person aliascatts
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, this was wonderful. I was waiting for you to continue this story. I started it on LD when you first posted it. I really enjoy the idea of Joey writing to his Benefactor and tell him all. Are you going to connect Noah and Seto in the future or are they going to be unrelated? I hope to see the next chapter soon. Cya Catts
person Ginkawa
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wo-hoo, one of my favourite novels twisted to fit the universe of one of my favourite animes and apparently with my favourite pair! It's been years since I found a fanfiction that promised so much and has me really wishing to read more! So please, continue it!

I just love your writting style, it doesn't seem like a fanfic at all, more like a novel indeed and that's great. Also your decission of combine story with letters chapters seems wonderful for me. I think it's a great way to write this story and as I said I can't wait for the next chapters.

By the way, sorry for my bad English. It's not my first language so I'm bonded to make some errors here and there with the grammar and the spelling. Thank you for posting this story and again please, if you can, continue it, I'll love to read more of it.
person kisa
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you finally updated youre wonderful story....It was agreat chapter...even better that I ppictured it whould be......plz update faster..can't waite to see what you do....and I though you bring seto's brother mokuba to be jou's room mate.....but you brought noah insted...it's more close to the original story......love kisa
person fiby
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey that's so great for Jou! I wonder how jou will do in the new life and how the kids will handle him leaving can't wait to read more.
person kisa
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why don't you continue.........I've been waitin.......plz post the next chapter I've already read this one and I wanna see where it ends.It's good.. really ......I never lie in my reviews this is good stuff
person cody_thomas
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Quite interesting. I'd love to read more!
person Miyo
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ts ver very intresting! I can't wait for more <33.Ill be keeping a eye out for updates <3.
person FBIY_lover
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story reminds me of "Daddy Roster Head" by dragon dreams on FanFiction.net except that is with the Naruto characters instead of Yu-Gi-Oh.