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for Daddy Dragon King

by yukikoangel

schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far so good...it's a really good story so far
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy you finally decided to go on with this story..Daddy long legs were my favorite story too....
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww...This is so sweet! I've written a number of AU fics before, but never have I seen something so beautifully written. I must say, you've done a really great job. What's this? No continuation? Seriously, you HAVE to continue this. I don't care if it takes you all night! You MUST write Chp 3 NOWZ!
person kisa
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
here is the first one: that was great
person kisa
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
secend one: update faster
person kisa
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
third: your really should take more time on writing.......your story is not like a copy or anything
person kisa
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
4th: will mokuba be in this story too? will jou hate seto in the beginiging just like the story?....will seto call jou puppy and all that?
person kisa
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fifth: I hope I read the rest of it tommorrw.there you have 5 reviews that should do.......love kisa
person lo
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, this seems like it willbe good. I think that you could use another opinion when it comes to proof reading this story.
person jess
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
does me reviewing twice count as another review? please continue this fic. i can't wait till he meets mr. m.