rate_review Reviews

I love this story - it's different, well thought out and written. Please don't rush just to meet a self-set deadline, quality is better than quantity. Just one thing though, and please don't take this as a negative - do you have a beta? There are small typo errors that spell correct would not pick up, as they are spelt correctly but the word is wrong. For example: "You" was suddenly awake - "you" should read "Ryou", and "regarded 'him' soft eyes", should read 'his'. I am a registered beta on this site, and would be more than happy to give a quick scan before uploading - if you wish!!!
Meanwhile, here's a pressie for you: http://s73.photobucket.com/albums/i223/feathersinmyhair/redemption/

great chapter
Bakura was so sweet
poor Ryo , Otogi was an idiot
can't wait for the next chapter

OOOOH! It's a DAMN good start! I loved it! I do hope you will write more soon, this is such a great story and I absolutely LOVE reading it! great job! I love you I love you I love you! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Oooooh! I LIKED this chapter! ^_^ SQUEE! Malik/Marik lovin! Thankies! I think that with the assistance of this chapter I may have figured out what Seto's secret is, but I'm not going to say anything just so I don't look like a moron if I'm wrong. next chappie soon I hope!

good chapter
Please write more jou/seto parts
smalvina

Yay, you're back! Excellent chapter, it was fun to see the auras of Yugi and his friends. Please update soon! I'm still looking forward to the moment (probably very far ahead in the future) when it's revealed that Seto/Bakura are angels (and those other two are demons) to Yugi and his friends. Please update soon! ^.^

Damn straight! Get to writing! I want more and I want it YESTERDAY! You teased me! How could you leave off THERE?! SOOOO NOT FAIR! Malik and Marik have some great chemistry and I'm desperate for more chappies of them 'developing' their relationship even further. Ah who am I kidding? I want to see ALL the couples 'actively developing their relationships', and I want it in explicit detail! Bakura and Ryou are beautiful together, and I am amused at Ryou turning Bakura into goo right in front of Seto, TOO CUTE! Seto defending his tea making ability was really cute too. He can boil water and not die/ blow things up/ destroy it with his holy sword, IT'S A START! Jou will have him melted and in love in no time and Yami and Yugi...I can easily see WHERE this is going, but I'm enjoying the process of it getting there so I can be patient. FOR NOW. ^_^ This story makes me happy, I am waiting for more!

Oh that's even better than him moving in with Yami! I almost feel sorry for him! And Bakura Kissing Joey was just TOO cute! I loved it! I can't wait for more Ryou/Kura interaction or how all the others and their counterparts get closer. I'll miss you while you're away, but it will make the next chapter even better if you can be rested and relaxed. Have fun on your trip!

XD OH BY RA! THIS CHAPTER WAS SOOOOOOO FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant waite for the next update!

*cracking up* Oh god...that mental image....*shakes fist weakly* Damn you Bakura!! Auuugh my stomach! It hurts to laugh!!