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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a-freaking-mazing. Love it, and many well wished to your mom and you!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was PRICELESS! I loved how they got Seto drunk, that was great! My roomie thought something was wrong with me I was laughing so hard! I also think it was slightly ironic, I was re-reading through this story from the beginning and was about to post a comment begging you to update and asking if everything was alright, when I click 'next chapter' and tada, you'd already posted! That just made my day. I'm glad your mom's alright and everything, and I do hope you'll get to update again soon, I am so in love with this story.
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have just started this story and already i feel like i'm ganna cry from the cruel punishment inacted on them! i comend you for your creativity and well planned and written story, i am so lost on how this will move! hehehe so excited!
J-chan
J-chan
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto
Hope Kura and Jou will help him
can't wait for more chapters
Hope Kura and Jou will help him
can't wait for more chapters
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice! i really love this story! it's great! please update soon!
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter, Duke is so evil, I just want to smack the bastard. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
good to see yugi and yami
can you show more of Seto and Jou?
good to see yugi and yami
can you show more of Seto and Jou?
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I'm very much in love with this! There are quite a few mistakes with spelling, grammar, and repetition in places, but I still enjoy each chapter. I did notice though, that Bakura seemed really friendly with Ryou's friends. I would expect him to be a little colder, but. xD;;
I really do like the way you're not afraid to talk about religion and stuff. That's refreshing, since a lot of people will only write about the old Egyptian beliefs/gods/etc. But you're not worried to type about the Big Man and basically everything that would piss the hell out of hardcore, radical evangelists. xDD For that, I love you. :D
I also like how Ryou's not a total spineless wimp of a shemale. Though, I think he did blow up a LITTLE much at being watched on his date. I can understand how upset that would make someone, but he was downright ferocious! o__o
I haven't reviewed this before, I know, and I should have, considering I really cannot remember all of what I should say, but if it makes any difference at all, I have drawn you a picture. I don't know if it would be called fanart, since it really is not a scene from this story at all, but was inspired by it? D: I wish my computer hadn't broken so that I could scan and color this with the Photoshop that I no longer have. I will find a way, eventually, but until then, you'll have to settle for a picture of the, well. Picture.
http://i22.tinypic.com/2saxvo4.jpg
I'm sorry it's so hard to see. Dx Even harder to make out the pencil-sketch wings behind Bakura. Ugh, sorry it's so shoddy. ;-; BUT. I think this story DESERVES fanart! Even-if-it's-not-really-fanart-but-sorta-is. 8D I would also add text to this when finished. And what inspired me, silly enough, was the whole toad/frog-to-prince conversation. xD;; My previous idea for the text was going to be something along the lines off, "A kiss for a toad, so that he may become my prince." Lawl, corny. I think I might draw some ACTUAL fanart for that one, though. This will probably just... blah, I'm rambling. @___@ -promptly shuts up-
And so ends this retarded, jump-everywhere-at-once review.
ButIreallydolovethisstoryandIjustwokeupafewminutesago. :D
~Cecilia
I really do like the way you're not afraid to talk about religion and stuff. That's refreshing, since a lot of people will only write about the old Egyptian beliefs/gods/etc. But you're not worried to type about the Big Man and basically everything that would piss the hell out of hardcore, radical evangelists. xDD For that, I love you. :D
I also like how Ryou's not a total spineless wimp of a shemale. Though, I think he did blow up a LITTLE much at being watched on his date. I can understand how upset that would make someone, but he was downright ferocious! o__o
I haven't reviewed this before, I know, and I should have, considering I really cannot remember all of what I should say, but if it makes any difference at all, I have drawn you a picture. I don't know if it would be called fanart, since it really is not a scene from this story at all, but was inspired by it? D: I wish my computer hadn't broken so that I could scan and color this with the Photoshop that I no longer have. I will find a way, eventually, but until then, you'll have to settle for a picture of the, well. Picture.
http://i22.tinypic.com/2saxvo4.jpg
I'm sorry it's so hard to see. Dx Even harder to make out the pencil-sketch wings behind Bakura. Ugh, sorry it's so shoddy. ;-; BUT. I think this story DESERVES fanart! Even-if-it's-not-really-fanart-but-sorta-is. 8D I would also add text to this when finished. And what inspired me, silly enough, was the whole toad/frog-to-prince conversation. xD;; My previous idea for the text was going to be something along the lines off, "A kiss for a toad, so that he may become my prince." Lawl, corny. I think I might draw some ACTUAL fanart for that one, though. This will probably just... blah, I'm rambling. @___@ -promptly shuts up-
And so ends this retarded, jump-everywhere-at-once review.
ButIreallydolovethisstoryandIjustwokeupafewminutesago. :D
~Cecilia
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Mean Evil Cliffie Teaser NOOO! Update! No cliffies, they aren't nice! I wanna read moooooore! Update update update! (Yes I'm being a whiny little bitch, I haven't slept well in three weeks so I'm cranky.) Now update before I go mad!
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE UPDATES!!!! YAY! ^_^ *Glomp* I love you!
And Otogi is seriously starting to scare me. O_o That last line was just downright creepy! I know Bakura can't die, but he still doesn't want his life to be a living hell. And I can just imagine what Seto, Yami and (possibly) Marik would do to the mortal wretch if he's stupid enough to try and hurt 'their' Bakura or start mucking up all their hard work. Although I can just as easily see Bakura, Malik and Joey coming in with a vengeance should Otogi try anything, especially since it involves Ryou. Update more soon so I won't go mad!
And Otogi is seriously starting to scare me. O_o That last line was just downright creepy! I know Bakura can't die, but he still doesn't want his life to be a living hell. And I can just imagine what Seto, Yami and (possibly) Marik would do to the mortal wretch if he's stupid enough to try and hurt 'their' Bakura or start mucking up all their hard work. Although I can just as easily see Bakura, Malik and Joey coming in with a vengeance should Otogi try anything, especially since it involves Ryou. Update more soon so I won't go mad!