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for Redemption

by cybergoth

person smalvina
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow
poor boys. it won't be easy on them. will jou be alone now? will marik?
please update soon.
person Nasa
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
akfghakdfjja'@(*$&(%& WHYYYYYYYYYYYY??!?!? T________T
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Ryou! *Teary eyes* but... he's with Bakura... I think I'll be ok. Oh but his poor friends. I feel so bad for them! You said there was a next chapter so the story can't be over yet, therefore I shall refrain from killing or maiming you. I make no promises for anyone else though. Hurry up and write!
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is amazing, please don't stop. I usually hate to read fics that are not finished but yours was to much interesting to avoid it. Sucks to be me!!! so please write faster. I'm begging!!!!
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O OMG! RYOU! BAKURA! *Kills Duke and mangles Seto* This cliffie had BETTER not last too long or I shall go insane! *inspires you* PLEASE write more soon! This is is is almost cruel! *Shields you from angry mob by locking you in a comfy office.* You'd better hurry, I don't know how long I can hold them off!
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you big meanie!!!


That was a fantastic update
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, what would it take, begging, pleading, groveling, or even offering to be a muse? I will do WHATEVER it takes to get you to update this story! PLEASE! just tell me how I can help and I will! you have no IDEA how much I love this story and I want to see it continued! emeraldfairy18@ hotmail.com email me!
person Kim
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I have thoroughly enjoyed plowing straight through all of this fic and am eagerly awaiting more. Bakura is just hot and I love how little Ryou is a great mix of shy and domineering. I also cannot wait to hear more about Yami and Yugi's date and really, really hope that we get the pleasure of awkward, possibly virgin Seto. I can't help it, he inspires pervy thoughts.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh Bumpy drama?! you promise? 0_0 *Squee!* ^_^ alright! and thank you thank you thank you for super sexy love making! I can't even call it a lemon because it was soooo much better than that! thank you thank you thank you!
person smalvina
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow
now you have to add seto\jou lemon and i will be happy ;)