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February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please continue and update soon!!!
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is a greet story.
please update soon.
please update soon.
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh so loving this story! It's really original. Please continue?! And maybe Mr. Motou can find it in his heart to not be an ass for the rest of the story! L8tr
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i adore dis story
pls pls pls update dis soon
pls
pls pls pls update dis soon
pls
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is great, can't wait for the next update!!!
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Please update again soon.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting, I can't wait to see where it's going. Is Yugi going to break out his wings and bodily save the fallen Yami while taking an injury only to be spirited away to Yami's den to recover? Or will the arrow miss Yami and give him a chance to hold his step father under his claws, only to look up into Yugi's innocent eyes and find himself unable to do the deed? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, i like this story. and i hope
that you will keep wrighting on it. ;)
and i you will get more rewiews.
well anyway keep up the good work.
chiao
that you will keep wrighting on it. ;)
and i you will get more rewiews.
well anyway keep up the good work.
chiao
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaa! So lovin this story! Why are you worried about originality? It seems to be very original to me! Please continue? This is awesome. Thanks for the review btw! I happen to like your work too!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me really like dis story
pls pls update again soon
pls pls update again soon