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by undercoverme

schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!! Please update soon. ^^
I hope Jou's evil grandfather gets what's coming to him. >:[
person Wicabeth
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shelly! I'm so glad you're posting here too!

You already know full well that I love this story, but of course, it's gotta be good writing in the genes ;D
I'm just sorry I didn't review sooner. If you chat with Maggie she'll tell you (left her a note) that I was gone last week and just got back last night.

*skips off to LD to read chapter 8!*
person Chikky
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update very very soon... I really like this story ^^; Can't wait for update ^^~
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jou, I can't beleive how badly his grandfather treated him. I hope he can get his memories back.
person Sammei
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I can't handle it! This was a real nail biter of a chapter for me. I'm not sure if it was the possibility of Seto getting caught, of their cover being blown, finding the pills. Just wow. Great great chapter. I'm glad that Seto's doc is good and decent - but hey, he's got connections and ways to get the best, right? Poor Jou.. I'm also really glad Rebecca found out the truth. I just can't help thinking that something is going to happen to blow Seto's cover, and then perhaps he'll need the rescuing? Oh, I hope not. Is the "special guest" on the plane that guy from the gorey chapter? Suppose I'll find out. I just hope justice gets served. Looking forward to your next chapter!
person JessicaM
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! A real doctor! the bird flu was a nice touch, and its nice to see Becca is not a raging psycopath like her hubby.
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Seto will do anything for Jou. I'm glad Jou decided to trust him. He also was ataking himself off the drugs. That was a smart move until he missed his half doses. I love it.
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. That bastard, he wasn't looking for an heir he was looking for a younger body. He's trying to make himself immortal. I wonder what Rebecca will do with her new knowlege. Update soon, please.
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ it still rocks my socks off update please ^_^
person tash1021
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww that has to be one of the greatest escapes i have ever heard
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