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person rage
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved that story!!!!!! i really like the way you finished it. GOOD JOB!!!!
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*applause* Spell binding and very well written. Just one question....there is going to be more right? A nice lemon for the masses? Please say yes *begs* Great job ^_^
person catti
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!Maggie...I hope you are okay..Kami..if there is anything you or your family need just email me and I will do everything in my power to help you and yours...damn..now I feel soo guilty because of our differences...but I will igorne it because of this...love you maggiemay...heart felt wishes to you and yours sent out....catti..
person Wicabeth
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
!! Maggie didn't tell me she was sick! Bap her one for me (gently though!) Though I noticed she wasn't on as much as usual.. *hugs you both!*

And, like I said on LD, Joseph got what he deserved *stabs him for good measure though*

And I'm excited about Jou Cool =D
person catti
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was kind of hoping for a lemon filler...there was promises of it in the last chapter...Jou getting stronger...a little teaser here and there...but it did not happen...could you do a filler lemon?...Jou and Seto were teasing so much that I thought a lemon would be the next chapter....(get better maggiemay...we love you and will send out good thoughts on your health)...catti
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Joseph is getting just what he deserves. I couldn't think of a more fitting punishment.
I hope Maggiemay is feeling better and getting stronger. That must have been one hell of a pneumonia to have to put her on a ventilator. Tell her we love and miss her but we will wait until she is better and stronger. I would rather wait than to see her ill.
Her health is more important than any story.
person kisa
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dear shelly
you have every right to call me a bitch and brat and even worse....i'm sorry I never check my e.mail.no one sends me anything there since I don't have a family and the reason is because I couldn't be home when my sister died......i'm not asking to forgive me or anything......I deserved that.and all I'm asking is to please take care of her when my sister died of canser i should've been there but I didn't I sayed back and let my mom go down alone...now you see all the thing that matters to me is reading and drawing(and that's that).......I never should've said that but I did so I promise I will do as you say and never review....I ansewr youre sister's e.mail but plz do tell her I/m sorry and please tell her I hope she'll be ok.....
person catti
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay...this story is soooo...f@#king awesome...I know that there are only nine chapers as you stated that in the beginning...so where is Chapter 9?...getting impatient here...laughs...ive always been the in patient one in a relationship...please update...please?!?!?!? catti
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I can't wait to see Joseph's reaction to all of this. he won't be happy.
person Wicabeth
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* I still love the chastity belt on Yugi XD Kinky and cute

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