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for Secrets, Lies and Hidden Truths

by UrsurlaFretz

person kisa
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
red rose?........that was so romantic...and youre choice of poem was great perfectly suitable for the mood....but how come otsogi is teasing jou?I don't want to predict things so just update soon.......love kisa
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! The rose thing was very sweet, and I really liked the poem. Somehow it makes sense that Seto would like the fact that Joey can stand up for himself. I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Rosebud
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I like where this is going. Please update soon!
person kisa
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dreaming is seto's way to blow off steam....but I don't think he'll simply go and tell jou he is the one writing those letters.....he just wont belive it....but if some one els find this out and sais he is the secret admierer?...outch I'm predicing again ......can't wait till tomorrow..... you sure have nice way of making people's mind busy honey.......love kisa
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey!!!!
your fanfic is just incredible. I really love it :p
^^ pleazzzzzz update very soon it's so great
I want to see how Seto's going to make Jou fall for him... eheh
keep on with it. ^^ kisses
person Rosebud
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Seto has such a soft spot for making that album. I can't wait to see what Jou's reaction to it is going to be!!! A lot of fics don't portray Seto as being romantic, but I think it's kind of cute! ;p

Wow...Things got 'Hot' towards the end of this chapter!!!! But poor Seto, his life's be reduced to exotic wet dreams. Hopefully he get the real thing soon lol.

Keep it up and I can't wait to read more.
person catti
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate Otogi, he is always making trouble for our lovers....yummy Jou in leather and collars...*wipes drool off*...love Seto as uke...he is sooo passionate and hot...Jou as seme is even better....YUM!!....catti
person catti
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your right Otogi is going to be a problem...jerk...I would have knocked him into next week for call me a bitch...Jou was being lenient...such a good boy sometimes...I like how you threw in that getting out of detention so non-chalantly....we so love Jou and is detetion....poor boy is always in detention...you going to make his dad a raging drunk like other stories? and if so how can that work in Otogi's favor? hmmmm?...catti
person Rosebud
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I really liked how you sequenced their dreams... And I take it that it’s Jou’s absent-mindedness and sleep depravation which is preventing him from even remotely considering that the time consuming photo album, plus, expensive gift card, equals, a certain CEO?

Hum... So now Otogi’s scheming? I wonder what he’s going to think up. This should be interesting.

Can’t wait for more!
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It sounds really good! Poor Seto, not being able to tell Joey how he feels! I love it, I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter!