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for Secrets, Lies and Hidden Truths

by UrsurlaFretz

person Rosebud
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seto is such a genius!!!!
This story is soooooo good. I can't wait until Jou pieces together that it's Seto!!!!!! I hope you get three reviews soon, I need you to update ASAP!!!! LOL!!!!! Keep it up and I can't wait for more! XD
person catti
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jou is so cute when he is mad...so loved the punching otogi in the eye....YES!!!....I hate otogi (but you know that dont you?)..finally Jou has a clue who is "secret admirer" is...laughs...blondes can be so dimwitted....*working the brown hair dye into the blonde roots showing*...catti
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Chapter three was hott, and chapter four was sweet, I can't wait until they finally get together. And what is Otogi going to do? I guess I'll just have to wait and find out. Can't wait till next chapter!
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wowww... great
It would be so funny to see them at school, trying to hide the fact that they love each other... a face to face would be so funny ^^
Otogi is just so stupid. he doesn't have a chance with jou.. ^^
keep on that's cool.
see ya
person kisa
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how come jou doesn't do anything to show some singns of his love to seto?>>well he feels the same way but e doesn't want to belive there is poosibility that these letters are from kaiba!!!this is so fucked up you know.loving some one the same way he loves you but you rather belive he hates you the most...their searching for something that is right infront of them...well just have to waite and see what will happen.....love kisa
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting story I cant wait for more ^^
person kisa
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh.I wanna murdur otogi..god what does he want?well no worries right? this is seto kaiba he is dealing with and he'll get what he deserves....poor jou this last dearm of his was so cruel...yore story is getting real i can almost feel it....love kisa
person catti
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate Otogi!!!..Jou is so dense, I could just scream...catti
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey.
pretty nice chapter. I loved when they were in the park... Seto was so nice with Jou. ^^
it's such a pity. they're too stubborn lol .
I'm looking forward the next chapter ^^
see ya
person Rosebud
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!
But Otogi's so evil...damn him!!!!