rate_review Reviews

I don't understand how I could miss this one! I mean I read it before and thought it great but it was never found again. Which could be partly because I wasn't looking for it in my years of absence.
Howerver ... you know how much I like your writing and this is no exception!
This story was very sensual ... like al the other ones you wrote (a long time ago I might add).
I don't know what elso to say; just know that I fell in love with your writings all over again and that I wouldn't mind to find somthing new of you here someday soon.

^-^
J-chan

I have no idea WHY you thought this story was cheesy, but it's most definitely NOT! This story was hot as hell!

Mmmm, I really liked this story. Hot, sexy, flirty, and well written. =D

I dislike that song immensely, but the story more than made up for it. You seem to excel at Yugi being an (often erotic) dancer, and also at Yami and Yugi being related in some way, which stops thm from being together, if only for a little while. Had to skip over the song lyrics, but the writing itself was very, very good. You should go professional.

Lechan. You are one of my favorite autors. I always wait for somthing new from you. I love that now story.
Atemu - he like see Yugi dance and he have agreed that Yugi dance for other people. Atemu take Yugi home,lock him - naked - in yours room and have nobody see him. Yugi is only Atemu's. I can't wait what will you post next. Chibi eyes.

Very hot story. Yugi is a rebel, that's something a bit different.

Great now every time I hear that song...Im going to be picturing Yugi pole dancing and cum filled leather pants...laughs....catti

HOT, HOT, HOT!!! Wow, that was good. Nice spin on the stepbrother thing!