rate_review Reviews

Wahhhhhhhhhhh, I don't Like this story anymore! Nobodys nice and eveything is all outta wack!

Wow, I never imagined Mokuba could be... well, like that. ^_^; I can't believe he'd be so mea. That "you're not my father" line about killed me. I really hope some good starts coming out of this, or Seto starts changing things, because, ahhh. XD
Also, as much as I like chapter 3, it's posted twice. ^_^; I can't wait to see what happens!! ;_;

Great job, looking forward to the next new chapter!

Wow...I can honestly say I never wanted to hit Mokuba until today...That kid needs a serious backhand. (sorry but i have no patience for spoiled brats). Can't wait to see what happens next!

Keep up the good work!

Oh dear, this story is a tad bit more serious and deep then I expected...wow. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh wow! This looks really interesting!

Keep up the good work!

Oh wow! This is a great start! I never thought about what would happen had, well none of that stuff happened. One of those "what if" issues that makes my head spin because so many things could be different. I'm actually a member of Dragon's Lair, but I always forget to check the messages, so by the time I do, I'm just so confused, so I never actually do. ^_^; I still only actually read fics from this site. Anyhow, I'll be looking forward to your next update! (Because I'm not sure I could wade through all the posts to find your story, and I'd feel bad reviewing it in one big clump while everyone else has already reviewed it... ahaha, rambling, sorry.)

Ohhh, way interesting start! can't wait to see more :)