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for Memories of Egypt

by Telpei

schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Glad I found this here. I think Seto is going to sorry about his wish.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Seto didn't expect this to happen. I hope he can turn his company around or go back to the way it was.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto, everything is certainly a mess for him and everyone else. I hope he can fix this somehow.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope he can get through to Jounouchi.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I wonder what Mokuba is thinking. I wonder if it was one Hiutani's gang members in disguise that set the fire.
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful, I loved the ending. Great work!
person JessicaM
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh...it's getting good now!

Keep up the good work!
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes!!!!! Someone's watching them, and if anything happens to either Kaiba or Jo, someone will pay!!!
Very wonderful chapter. Glad to see Seto be able to help Katsuya. Too bad Shizuka died though...
Really loving it! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
~KS
person JessicaM
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! it's been updated!...what colour are Mokuba's eyes again? I was so upset when Yugi rejected Kaiba's offer of friendship.

Keep up the good work!
person Sammei
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great chapter(s). I did not see Jou's ties to the gang being so strong, and Hirutani to be so powerful. Or Jou to bring that gun to school. And that's awful about Shizuka... But the scene in the park (at least the last bit), was really sweet. I wonder what Mokuba will do. I don't suppose he'd be as understanding, since he's not as sweet in this reality... I can't wait to see what happens next!