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I hope someone can help Jouno and Ryou. Poor Bakura needs to quit playing this game before it turns deadly.
Good chapter.

Good chapter. Jouno is going to get revenge on Kaiba somehow. I'm glad Ryou let Bakura out. This is really good.

Poor Jouno, I wonder if the doctor did betray him or if it is just his overactive imagination.
I feel bad for Bakura, no one should have to take that kind of abuse. I hope he can shake some sense into Ryou soon.
Good chapter.

Wow, I think Bakura's getting a little tired of his Hikari being a pain in the ass; especially with that last line. I've noticed the subtle changes in him since the first chapter and even though his desire for pain in continuous, his tolerance for it seems to be slipping. I wonder how much more Bakura's going to be able to take, before he hits Ryou back. It'll be interesting to see.

I really felt bad for Bakura too. Here he had a chance to Fuck two hot Egyptians and he turned them down. Ah, but on the same note I guess it's cute -how loyal he is to Ryou! Grrr...Ryou give Bakura some love...please!!!! He needs it!

As far as Jou goes, lets me tell you I was freaking out when Mokuba invited him over to the mansion. Though I was glad that nothing bad happened...Well except for Seto being a cold hearted bastard, but there's nothing new there.

I see Jou taking on more serious undertones now. It's really hard to peg what he'll do next because he seems to be all over the place mentally; but it makes for more surprises.

I wonder what he's going to do to the good Doctor????

Anyway, keep it up and I'm looking forward to reading more!

~Later

Sorry I didn't review sooner, but I've got a horrible cold and every time I sit down in front of the computer, I feel like my skull is going to crack open... Anyway, despite the pain my need to read this story got the best of me and here I am, ready to review LOL!

First off, when I read that Marik and Malik were going to be in the story I nearly jumped out of my seat! I love the Egyptian psycho's and I can't wait to see what happens between them and Bakura!!!! Oooooh, maybe Ryou will get jealous...or maybe not. He doesn't seem to want a relationship with Bakura, at least not a sexual one... I do hope that changes, though.

So, wow...Jou's a genius then!!!! o.0 And now he's on some insane quest to take down Kaiba Corp? Talk about doing a one-eight personality wise. But you know, I'm not sure I can see him going through with it, at least not all the way. He's too obsessed with the CEO to destroy him...I think???

Anyway, Great chapter and as always, I'm looking forward to reading more.

BTW, I think that it's an awesome idea if/when you ever get around to writing that story about Ryou. I know I would love to know all the stuff that he did, and what made him change so drastically.

Until next time!

YAY, for long reviews...because this one is probably going to be longer then the last lol!
And YAY for Seto!!! Because, well...because next to Bakura he's my favorite Yu-gi-oh character! So, on with the review...

The first thing that came to mind for this chapter was, WOW, it rocked!!! I felt like I'd gone on a rollercoaster; one minute I was laughing and the next I was shocked.

At the beginning I really felt sorry for Bakura; even though it was cute too, how distraught he was about Ryou not giving him enough love. And seriously, I almost fell out of my chair laughing when I read the whole "mushi mushi" thing. God, I'm still cracking up about it while I'm trying to type.

5 minutes and quite a few laughs’ later...ok, I’m alright now ^^;

o.0 Anyway!!! I LOVE how you portrayed Yami; I can just picture him saying that stuff. Though; I actually think that all your characters have an intriguing amount of depth to them, and it really makes the story more palpable.

But... then...suddenly, the story got all dark and serious -which is ok because I absolutely LOVE dark and serious fan fiction- and I was freaking out when Bakura passed/blacked out! And I was like OMG! Bad, Bad Ryou for hurting my precious Bakura...uh, I mean for hurting your Yami! I think Kura might be getting in over his head. Just exactly what the hell was Ryou doing all that time he was gone? And I was so sure you were going to have him throttle that doctor!

All I can say in regards to Jou, is that he is really fucked up! But I like that you give your characters darker personalities. BTW… was that Seto at the end of the chapter...me thinks it was!!! XD

Looking forward to reading the next chapter and writing another long review!

Oh, yeah...I just went to your homepage and I realized that your the Author of 'Baku, Ra, to Ringu: Uncut' -I'm such a dork for not realizing it sooner- ^^;
Anyway, I love that story and I'm still trying to read through it. So many chapters, but its so good too!

~Later

LOL, I couldn't help but laugh at some of the similarities there were in the story to things I actually do. Like when Jou went back to turn up the stereo so he could hear it in the bathroom… I’m the same way; I always play my music way too loud. You can even hear it all the way down stairs...it’s a miracle that the neighbor’s don't complain. ^^; And I love to listen to Metallica when I can't sleep, so yeah, I had to laugh about that as well.

So, it was too bad that Kaiba Corp wasn't hiring... I want to see Seto lol. But are you planning on introducing him anytime soon??? *crosses fingers* And Bakura, he sure loves pain, what a sadist, but that’s one of the reasons why I love his character! ;p You know, I feel that your doing an awesome job at keeping him character, even though its not exactly the cliché role that most people give him. It does well for the story and I love the dark undertones that you got going. I also agree with what you said at the beginning, Ryou does appeal to me as one of those silent yet deadly types, who keeps a lot to himself…giving a bright smile to the world, but then thinking something else completely different on the inside.

o.0 I think this review is getting to be awfully long, so I better warp things up <3

Over all I think that was a really, really good chapter and I can’t wait to read more tomorrow! Keep up the great work!

~Crimson2006

Good chapter. I wonder what happened to Ryou. I know I read this on ff.net?

Good chapter. I'm glad you posted this here too.

Bakura is really sacrificing himself to help Ryou's pain. I wonder how long he will take it. Good chapter.