rate_review Reviews

I'm glad my review got you back into updating on this site. Thanks for the adknowlegement. I really enjoyed the Ryou/Jono scene. Nicely detail and sexy as heck. I hope you put more scenes like that into this story. Keep on writing ;) I added this story under recoomended reading under my profile too :)

I'm so glad you're updating this wonderful story again. I left a more detailed review on your ff.net version, under JiangShi. Keep on writing!

You know, this story really is awesome. I love a dominant Ryou, and Bakura still thinks he can beat Ryou if he wants too… oh, Bakura. And the bit about Malik and Mariku was adorable. I hope they come back to the story soon. Though, entering Sakuma in there kinda threw me off. Hm… I actually hope for thiefshipping in the end, but… whatever you planned is probably good. Oh wel,, continue this soon, please!

Omg the getting knocked over by the car and then bitch slapping the girl was hilarius. Just the situation would be kinda funny, then you add in who it is.

YAY! Awesome chapter! It's been a while ne? Lucky me, I just logged on and your story was the first one on the page!!!
Poor Bakura, masturbating in bed with Ryou right there lol. I'm sure it's going to be a while before they hook up...your still planning for them to get together, right? I can't wait to see what happens with Jou and Ryou! Hehe, PLEASE update this soon. I think of this story from time to time and I'm glad that you're still working on it! Keep up the good work!

OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com I also plan on reading Baku, Ra, to Ringu: UnCut on this site as well so could you do it for that one too? *chibi-puppy eyes*

I'm still reading, really! and still loving the story :D Poor doctor! *wonders if Joey really has a yami or if that's just his psychosis going to a new level* *gets a slight brain cramp cause it could go either way (a testiment to your good writing)* *scolds self for trying to guess the story and not being patient and waiting for an update*

though i do wonder how the dead doctor is gonna affect the joey/seto dynamic :p

hehe and even if it doesn't seem it, I am really interested in the ryou/bakura part too! Seto's just my favorite character in case you couldn't tell. *glomps teh Seto*

Whee! can't wait until the next update :D I wants to see what happens!

Wow so Jou has a Yami, how awesome is that! I don't think I've ever read anything like this before and to tell you the truth, I like it a lot! Great Job, you do good to keep the story interesting! I hope that Jou didn't kill the doctor though. I mean she seems like a bitch, but OMG...him killing someone will change everything. o.0 what if he goes after Seto!!! ;o;

Run away Seto...

Damn, Ryou's a bit of a slut now, isn't he? But wtf is he doing wandering the streets looking for sex when he has Bakura at home!!! What's wrong with you Ryou????

Well, I hope that you can get the next chapter up soon, I'm highly anticipating what's going to happen next! Keep up the good work!

~Later

Good chapter. Too bad Ryou doesn't realise everything he needs and wants is at home.
I hope He didn't actually kill her, although if she betrayed their confindentiality she probably deserves it.
Kaiba may not have really known anything and jou thought he did because of his own guilt. I wonder how his Yami will get him out of this.

Cant wait for more ^.^