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person eve4mem
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great, I almost missed the update. I like this story it's been a while since I've checked into this fandom but you're making it worth while. I can't wait to see where this leads it's just too cute to see them both shy and misunderstanding. Please bring more soon.
person cinque
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, how could you? please, don’t do that to poor Katsuya. PLEASE!!

You give me a heart ache, thinking of Katsuya paralyzed, but other than that I liked this chapter very much
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Seto can help Jou some. Too bad Anzu was killed. Good chapter.
person Lici (won't login, but eh)
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Jou! I love Jou. He's very kind and sweet and...and....
...You had better be good to him. He needs it.

So far this story had been good. Even without a plot *snicker* I just wonder what Kaiba will do. I mean, Seto is all powerful in the corporate world, but will that be enough to help Jou? And will Honda get his head out of his ass any time soon? I know he's a great guy and all, but come on! He's got Miss Perfect right THERE and does NOTHING, his best friend has a CRUSH on their supposed ENEMY, and he is running on the damn hamster wheel of stupidity.....Anyway... *clears throat*

If you could be so kind, please email me when the next chapter is posted:
kiki_yaoi@yahoo.com
person girlo
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kaiba had better be being helpful. Or else! i can't actually back that threat up...
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this a lot. They were so good together. The speech was nice. I hope Joey will be okay. Update soon, please.
person cinque
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg poor Jou...how could you? *lol*

That was a really good start. I hope you continue soon.
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very intresting! I loved the first chapter, please update soon, this is really god!
person Sammei
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, suspense-filled cliff hanger! I can't handle it!

But no, seriously. Great start! I'm really looking forward to what you do with this. Though, I'm confused that it can have death, AND be WAFF-y, but oh well. I guess as long as the death isn't Jou's..... right? RIGHT? Heh. Looking forward to your next update!
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O____O yeah kinda how mine went too minus the guns but there was a helicopter! ^^

T_T poor jou update please!

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