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Lol. Talk about awkward... Nothing like walking in on two apparently straight guys who apparently hate each other having sex...

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

OMG THAT ROCKED *laughs* it was so cute

i like how they weere there u entered the story quit well in the points of few and u showed u had a fairly good matrial of reserch good 4 u

but next time i sujest that u talk about 3D degree asult or even soem thift 2

also when ur talking bout body parts if u want the doctors 2 sound perfetional u might wnat 2 look up a few words that describe humen body parts
like glutiesmaxiumus and for his iner walls u could use

"he has an batiral infection on the in walls of his glutiesmaxiumus on the nerve endings" oO yeah that might be more doctorish

and when the detective ta;ks bnout his report u can say

"you will need to write out ur witness reprt the time and excat location u need 2 sign it and u may have 2 come into cort"

also when u describe a dream i might wnat to have the meaning behind it as a follow up

but you have a great story and can't wait 2 read more of it keep up the fantastic work

Poor Jounouchi he is confused. I hope this will clear this up a little for him. Good chapter.

Good chapter. At last the truth is coming out. I'm glad for Jounouchi's sake that it is.

Good chapter. I'm glad that the truth is finally coming out for Jounouchi's sake as well as Seto's.

Good chapter. They finally are really together and telling the world or at least his friends.

gasp! is there more?
that cant be the end yet, it just got even better than it already was!

Good chapter. I'm glad Seto is taking care of Katsuya. I wonder if Seto will cinvince himself he is not gay. Somehow I don't think so.

Good chapter. I wish he could realise that Seto was not one of his attackers. Why would Seto mug him for twenty bucks. He obviously doesn't need it and then why would he help him? He's not thinking.

Can't wait for the next update. It's a great story.