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When I raed the title of this fic I thought it would be something borring lovly-dovely, but this fic is anything but borring. I dont really understand all te dreams, but your imagination is just amazing. I wouldnt be able to come up with all these sequenses. The begining with the poison was confusing too, but I guess (hope) you will reveal the meaning soon.

Honda is really getting on my nerves right now. How can he be this mean to his friend?

I like how dream Seto changed with the developing feelings of real Seto. At the begining he was so mean to Jou- treating him like a slave, but now he marked Jou as his own...and is now worthy of beeing Jous master?

You are a great writer and I hope to read more soon.

Love your story!

Yummy yummi yum! I love this story! More please? *bows* ^_^

This was a good fic, with a great plot. I liked the way you wrote it and I especially like the part with the dreams. However, throughout every chapter, there is one thing that kept irritating me to no end; The exclamation points. There, in my personal opinion, were far to many of them. I'm a Yu-Gi-Oh fan, so I know that Seto wouldn't speak like that, as in, the words and dialog was accurate enough, but you gave him too much emotion. There were certain sentences he would actually say, but he wouldn't say them so excitedly or passionately. Some of them he would and some of them he wouldn't. You also did the same thing for Jou's character. Yeah, I know I'm a total loser for knowing all this, but oh well. Anyways those two things were all was wrong. Other than that, I really enjoyed your fic, and am waiting for an update. Great job on this. (Sorry if my review seems mean, I'm just tryna be honest [I'm a perfectionist and a freak so I kinda scope these things out. Sorry ^^;)

--Schwarzer

Let me clear up one thing; he would say somethings passionately, but in front of Jou because he's not at an enough level of comfort to allow himself to do so (right? if I'm totally dead wrong sorry ^^). So erm, yeah ^^.

--Schwarzer

OMG! Incredible...AGAIN! I must know what all these dreams mean. 0.0 Poor Seto, though, I mean having to deal with all those dreams. If it were me I would be excited to go to sleep, but this is Seto though. I mean self induced insomnia is a bit harsh, right? Bleh, I'm babbling, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

it's cute if not slightly confusing but hopefully more chapters will clear things up. I liked it.