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for Undressing

by Hideki LaShae

schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a very nice story. I loved the concept and the choices of tattoos. Actually, I like the idea of using the tattos to cover his scars. Your portrayal of Jou's deep love for Seto is very well done. And I love the way you show Seto's 'undressing' for Jou. And you do a great job of keeping them both IC without losing any love and sentiment in the story. Also, great job on Jou's 'voice' for this piece. It's very clear and I could see his point of view clearly.

Thanks for sharing!

'Ko
person Rosebud
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the ending was so sweet!
I really enjoyed reading this story.
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I loved reading this! I'm a huge puppyshipping fan and I've been looking for something new to read, thank you for writing this! I look forward to reading more of your work!
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! I love the idea of the tattoos on Seto's chest and back.
Very wonderful!
~KS
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the most beautiful stories that i've had the honor to read. THANK YOU!

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