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Um, just a question, but do you do illegal drugs? I mean, that was right out left field, has nothing to do with anything, basically. It's not even a rip off to your other story, seeing as that's Bakura and Yami. But, this one, this is just wrong. Sure, I chuckled here and there, but what's the point of it?

Interesting! I'd say for the most part I liked it!
Nice ^^

Not to piss on your parade, but this is copied almost verbatim from "The Ref" - I only say almost because you used Yugioh names in place of the original characters. You might want to consider that other people are going to recognize the lines before you try to pass something off as your own work. Or you should at least tell people where you're getting it from so you can't be accused of plagarizing.