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by Wedo2hvhrts

schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh!!! sneeeeky mokuba! XD
That was fantastic :p . thumbs up for kaiba pulling himself together and do something non-mean
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ending to the rockiest beginning. You're simply too good. You're probably one of the only authors I've had the pleasure to read and get away with ending the story with 2 paragraphs and the whole story being 2 chapters long. Kudos to you!!!! and Mokie needs to be loved to for being 'cupid'
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sniffle* good GOD that was cute.
person anessa-chan
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess you wanted it to end really quickly, but I still liked it:)
person kisa
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.that happend so fast....you could ended each paragraph of chap 2 in one chapter....but it doesn't change the fact that it was one hell of a story..you really are talented plz write more but tend to detailes and use this great style of writing more.......lookin forward to read what ever there is under this name.....love kisa
person tash1021
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO there not suppposed to die *sobbs uncontrolably*
person Anon
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is simply adorable...I love the ending...I love the whole story!!! you're the greatest!!!
person kagomegirl
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha LOL ONG an evil matchmaking Mokuba hahaha awsome fic!! ^_^
person K.E.Y.
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHAHAHA, I love Mokuba, He is such a little cocky bastard
person Rosebud
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!