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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jou is the shit! All the guys want a piece of that ass! Power for four! Cant wait to read more.
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was HOT!!! Somuch smexyness!!! Thankies :D
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD !!!!! THis is one HOT shitt!!!! I'm officially your fan man this is really killing me....WHO is gonna own jou's ass in this mess?.......THat phone sex was FU***ING amazing by the way.....I almost fell off my chair by the time I was done reading it...It's about time some one writes some real work around here...Please keep updating ...
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah mean mean qluffie!! please update again soon... i really like this story!!
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHH! This story is hot hot hot!!! I wonder who's on the other line...great story so far.
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!! I hate cliffhangers!
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it . . . but a spelling error that made me laugh.
"... Kaiba always wondered what it would be like to hear that voice say his name in the throws of passion."
throes, hun. You don't throw passion. But I would like to try. X9
"... Kaiba always wondered what it would be like to hear that voice say his name in the throes of passion."
Okie X3 keep up the good work, but get a beter BETA-er. Contact me if you wish. I do grammar, spelling, tenses, punctuation, etc. Actually, I beg it. I love fixing grammar mistakes.
"... Kaiba always wondered what it would be like to hear that voice say his name in the throws of passion."
throes, hun. You don't throw passion. But I would like to try. X9
"... Kaiba always wondered what it would be like to hear that voice say his name in the throes of passion."
Okie X3 keep up the good work, but get a beter BETA-er. Contact me if you wish. I do grammar, spelling, tenses, punctuation, etc. Actually, I beg it. I love fixing grammar mistakes.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know?the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved the latest chapter, i hope you update soon >_<