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Gaaah! *falls over, twitching* That. Was. Hot. All of it, though I admit I preferred this latest chapter to the first one. *giggles* Keep it up, Tavi! That damn plot bunny better keep feeding you ideas... Otherwise, it's dinnertime... :)

Very well done. And yes, the plot bunny is an aggrevating creature (it visits me while doing the dishes). As for the first lemon, I don;t think it sucked nearly as much as you thought it did ; )

*magically appears next to you, holding the plotbunny you tried to kill in her arms as she smriks wickedly* Yes, I've finally found the time to read this... that, and I just remembered I still had to read it in the first place which I kept forgetting. Now then, Hentei and me (yes, I've named the bunny Hentei) would like to have a word with you about the third chapter to this *looks innocently, Hentei memicing the look* Oh yeah, and there's no escape from this Hentei, it's immortal. It'll just keep coming back! MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hentei: MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Moony: O.o;; dude, the bunny can even laugh evilly... COOL! I like this bunny, but it's yours so yeah, I've come to return it *nods*
Hentei: Kyuu! *jumps onto your lap*
Now then, since I liked this chapter a lot, we're going to have a nice talk about making a chap 3. *grins evilly* Of course, no other reviewers allowed, sorry people. *coses immaginary door so no one else can hear what's being discussed though multiple evil laughs can be heard*

Moony

Ohhhhh! Very nicely done. Now be a good little author and go back to your story(IS),using that perverted little plot bunny. Although,seriously,thanks for this.

Believe it or not, there are many perverts on AFF, lol. As for the PWP, I thought it was great. I especially like how you made Yugi taller and more sure of himself and Yami(Atemu) a bit insecure, makes them seem more real. I hope you do more fics like this (not necessarily PWP's) for I like the Y/YY pairing as well.

~J. Hellraiser

Just as delicious as the first! I like RayeMoon too! I've read all of her fics. I've read all of yours too. Yay me ^_^

Revenge is sweet especially in this case. I loved it.

*droooools...* Well, I thought your first chapter (your first attempt as you said) was good for a first time *^-^* *DROOLS HARDER* The second chapter.. so hot *wipes the drool off the keyboard*

gods that was HOTT!! *fans self* more??
maybe a new one??
o o o i know to a seto and jou one!!
PLEASE *whimpers*

Tavi, dear, that was lovely. I adore a seme-Yugi. I also like how he's taller than Atemu. I've NEVER seen that before. Very original. This was an adorable fic, and very hot. Do keep writing. You're right, there are not enough YxYY fics. My next to be posted is YxYY, so look forward to it. Thank you for your review. I will look forward to reading more of your work. Jaa!
RayeMoon