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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please more, next chapter with Atemu and Yugi as brothers, please.
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually one for incest, but for some reason, it didn't bother me in this fic. I pretty much like anything you write anyways. This story isn't an exception. Great job and hope that you continue your other two YGO stories soon. Also, if it isn't too much trouble, I'd like to hear the song that you were talking about.
~Yami Yuugi
~Yami Yuugi
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Normally i wouldn't read an incest fic, but this was really good! FYI: I don't like pulp in my orange juice either! Please update your Shadows and Light fic soon, thats another one of my favorites!
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!! I think I read that other story you mentioned. But I honestly think your story is like way better. SO much description..and feeling. This is definitely one of my favorites of yours. I hope to read more from you soon.
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When I have see that you have update new story I have feel something in my heart. What? Joy. I'm so happy that
you have write that story. I love this. That was good. I love that part when Atemu have see his little brother in club and when he have help Yugi. I hope that You will be soon update "Memories..." I realy hope that in that new chapter we will be see part when Atemu will make love to Yugi.
you have write that story. I love this. That was good. I love that part when Atemu have see his little brother in club and when he have help Yugi. I hope that You will be soon update "Memories..." I realy hope that in that new chapter we will be see part when Atemu will make love to Yugi.
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was ??????????????????????????? Enjoyable.
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A great story non the less! I really like your writing and hopefully i will see then soon again!
like memories of shadow and light one of my favorite story:D (update soon?)
but this is a review of catacombs of sin, and i like it. keep up the good work and i'll see ya later;)
bye bye
L.Meh
like memories of shadow and light one of my favorite story:D (update soon?)
but this is a review of catacombs of sin, and i like it. keep up the good work and i'll see ya later;)
bye bye
L.Meh
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH....it so worked...love this story...can actually hear Atemu's voice as he has Heba cornered in the back room of the strip club...deep and low...sensual...GOD this is sooo f@#king hot....catti
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually read the original story and I think this would actually beat it, though I swear you're all mean for leaving out the actual sex having part *pouts* still, loved to read it and definitely one of the best I've read. I do hope there'll be a sequel to it.
Moony
Moony