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April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is SOOO goood I can just like.. diie. Gah I shiver from unexplained feelings coursing through my body. Omg it's so good I feel like... like I had a Fanfic ORGASM. Holy shit that is something new. And I don't think I can ever experience it again T_T ugh I'm so sad. You have to write a sequel! Well okay.. I shouldn't force you to..
Gah it was sooo hooot. I mean Atemu's pole dancing was like the friggen best EVER.. I always wondered how males could pole dance and look erotic but you just friggen proved it to me. OMG. Gah soo good best seen and read from male and female *gushes*.
Ah and the story just friggen sucked me in... Ahh it felt so wonderful - I guess I'm just creeping you out now.. and other people who may have read this.
Gah it was sooo hooot. I mean Atemu's pole dancing was like the friggen best EVER.. I always wondered how males could pole dance and look erotic but you just friggen proved it to me. OMG. Gah soo good best seen and read from male and female *gushes*.
Ah and the story just friggen sucked me in... Ahh it felt so wonderful - I guess I'm just creeping you out now.. and other people who may have read this.
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:3
so sweet, ne? I like it
so sweet, ne? I like it
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September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this one and I think you know it because I told you so often already. Nevertheless I never did review it and I'm sorry for that.
It's so well written and so sensible and sensual that it is capturing anyone who reads this. Because of you I have high standards in reading even if no one cares. I really would like to write as well as you do one day.
It's so well written and so sensible and sensual that it is capturing anyone who reads this. Because of you I have high standards in reading even if no one cares. I really would like to write as well as you do one day.
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a worthless in terms of a helpful review, but I have to say what I gotta say.
This was the first romance story I have ever read. And of course it had to be YGO *slaps forehead*. I was touched, and in my heart had strong feelings reading this, but in my head I'm yelling at myself for reading a fuggin YUGIOH romance story. 18 for christ's sake, shouldn't I be, I don't know, GROWING UP?
Even though I'm dissapointed in my (lack of) tastes, I still loved reading the Catacombs of Sin. I read it more than twice, each with the same level of emotional response. And I'm probabally going to read the rest of your YGO stories. Sorry if I seem a bit harsh, but my harshness isn't directed at you.
Oh, I do have one thing to say, though, in terms of quality. I laugh aloud whenever you use the word "duel" or have yugi/atemu play card games, but don't overdo it. What you did in Catacombs was fine, with you metioning those two things twice, but it could be easily overused and become corny, so watch out.
Thank you for reading this, and I'm sorry for having waste you time
And thank you
R_B
oh, and a speck of irony. one of the passwords I had to enter was "loveless". That probabally has some divine-sent meaning, but I'm going to ignore it.
This was the first romance story I have ever read. And of course it had to be YGO *slaps forehead*. I was touched, and in my heart had strong feelings reading this, but in my head I'm yelling at myself for reading a fuggin YUGIOH romance story. 18 for christ's sake, shouldn't I be, I don't know, GROWING UP?
Even though I'm dissapointed in my (lack of) tastes, I still loved reading the Catacombs of Sin. I read it more than twice, each with the same level of emotional response. And I'm probabally going to read the rest of your YGO stories. Sorry if I seem a bit harsh, but my harshness isn't directed at you.
Oh, I do have one thing to say, though, in terms of quality. I laugh aloud whenever you use the word "duel" or have yugi/atemu play card games, but don't overdo it. What you did in Catacombs was fine, with you metioning those two things twice, but it could be easily overused and become corny, so watch out.
Thank you for reading this, and I'm sorry for having waste you time
And thank you
R_B
oh, and a speck of irony. one of the passwords I had to enter was "loveless". That probabally has some divine-sent meaning, but I'm going to ignore it.
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story hun. I'm actually a huge fan of well writen incest between yugi/yami/atemu either two of them or all three. -sighs- I've not been able to find many in this fandom. I was shocked. I thought more people would have done this sort of idea.
If you know of some that are well written or just good, please send them my way if you have the time, or remember.
Thank you.
If you know of some that are well written or just good, please send them my way if you have the time, or remember.
Thank you.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A lovely read! I found this fic to be very endearing, though a tad bit embarassing as well. I would have died if I had been in Yugi's position with a problem in public! X_X Much less my own flesh and blood catching it lol!
Still this was very cute and well written, well done! I can't wait to see more of your work, until then ~Passing Reader
Still this was very cute and well written, well done! I can't wait to see more of your work, until then ~Passing Reader
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. I hope they will be very happy. Ryo needs to find Bakura for himself.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really should write a sequel^^ This was damn good! And long.:D
The language was really good, it set the mood for the whole story. And i like the plot. The forbidden relationship. Maybe because I'm so used with Yugi and Atemu it didn't disturb me that they were brothers here.
You write really good^^
...and I'm just random. :P
The language was really good, it set the mood for the whole story. And i like the plot. The forbidden relationship. Maybe because I'm so used with Yugi and Atemu it didn't disturb me that they were brothers here.
You write really good^^
...and I'm just random. :P
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...damn...good! I've read this so many times and every time it still tugs all my emotions - and let me tell you, VERY rarely does writing get that sort of response from me. I can't believe what a good author you are, you should really get something publish, if you haven't already (it wouldn't surprise me if you had.) I love the writing, I love the idea, I love the way you presented it - the only thing that disappointed me slightly was that you didn't write when Yugi actually 'got his cherry popped' as you put it. Given how incredibly good you are at writing lemon scenes, I would have liked to see that. But hey, I'm happy just re-reading this over and over again.
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I blushed, I squealed, I covered my eyes and giggled uncontrollably, I very nearly cried! All in all I'd say you have a top notch sinfully amazing fic here! I absolutely loved this.