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for Then and Now

by cinque

person joice1st
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all, thank you for your e-mail~ I'm glad you don't mind seeing me babbling. ^^;

My heart was beating so fast when I saw that you already updated the 6th chapter. At first I don't know if I should click it open now or later because... it was like my fingers were cold (kinda need to warm them first). I hope Seto and Katsuya get together and never apart again, although it would be very hard for that to happen, since what their step-father did is still a deep secret. Why did Katsuya decide to suffer from it without telling anyone? It's not that I didn't know... I guess he wouldn't want to upset his two brothers.

PS. Reading your story makes me want to write Kai/Jou fic. ^____^ I'm also a fanfic writer (though my English language skill is kinda pathetic...).
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sobs* Poor Seto!!!!!! Stupid Jou-chan for not having the balls to explain himself!!! Grr.... Despite how much I absolutely love your fic, I hate it at the same time! Not in a bad way!!!! IT just gets me so upset cause they each think the other hates him and it's just, gah! I wanna rip my hair out! But i's so wonderful, can't wait for more!
~KS
Oh, and sorry bout the language ^^;;
person eve4mem
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have one question what about that tape of Jou and Seto. After the dad died shouldn't have all his things went to Seto? And if so shpuldn't he have found that tape? And the dad must have recorded some of his time with Jou so Seto could have saw that too. Oh well it's good I like it it just needs to be beta. Can't wait for more.
person girlo
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Baby doll! Why can't they ever just be/stay happy?
Keep up the writing and I'll keep up the reading!
person zoe
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact they have found each other again but its so sad how they have :(
I cant wait untill Seto finds out why Katsu left, but at the same time dreading it, he will probably find out the truth right around when Noah dos, and well that will open up a new can of worms
update again soon
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it, absolutly love it, ooh i hope you put the next chapter up soon >_<
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I so can't wait to see how they react when they realize who each other is!!! Oh, it's gonna be so sad and upsetting and it's gonna make me wanna scream, but I still can't wait! Hoping you update as soon as possible!
~KS
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O cliffy, hmn update ^_^
person joice1st
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's me again!

Thank you for updating "Then and Now" and also thank you for replying my review for the previous chapter. This interlude is nicely done. I'm impressed by the double sides of story of Katsuya and Seto. It've been 3 years since they were apart, and now it's their decision to stay apart or be together again.

It's probably not easy for Seto. Why Katsuya didn't show up after their step-father dead? And why did he decide to leave? As we know that Katsuya isn't the type to express his feeling when it comes to his decision... Oh! Sorry for babbling ^^" I'll stop now~

PS. Sorry for my poor English. It's obviously not my first language. :(
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your take on this. Please continue.

'Ko