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goooooood .....why the fuck jou can't open his mouth and tell him the truth so every thing whould be okay? I don't know witch one is more stupid....you made the best out of this fic when they say love makes you deaf and blind and mute & makes you a complete idiot.......if noah dares to interfier whith this I don't know if I can keep myself from throwing my monitor out of the window......plz just update ....and I really don't think you need complement you should know you're great

awww how cute! ^_^ update please

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Dude. Focus on Joey and Kaiba. Yami, Duke, and Tristan aren't important.
Perhaps the reason is because I am only a fan of Jounouchi and Seto. lol
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Still continue with the lovely story! :D

Oh ^_^ update yeah?

I love "Then and Now" more and more by every chapters. I adore the way you write both POV of Seto and Katsuya. It's sad to know that they both think that it's their own fault. I wish they would understand each other soon... I guess maybe Mokuba is the key to their happiness.

There are some other things I haven't tell you. I notice that each chapter has their name which is similar to each one. This is so nice! Also in the last chapter, I forgot to ask what is Noah's role in this story, but luckily this new chapter already explains my inner question. And may I ask something, are there going to have Yami/Yugi and Honda/Otogi in the story? I like those pairing~

PS. After reading your story, I decide to write a Seto/Jou story dedicate to you because you're the one who made me adore this pairing. ^____^ I hope you don't mind if I do that (it probably will take awhile before I send the link of my story to you).

Dude, finish this story or I'll murder you! D: I want to know what happened. Oh and types slowly so you won't get typos. D:

OMG!!! DON'T STOP THERE!!!! I'll beg you like the Katsu-uke I am deep down inside!!! (ummmm I RP jou in a jou/seto online RPG.... sorry if i seem a bit schitzo....) BUT I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!! pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease keep writing!!???!!??!!!? (RP WITH ME!! A HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!) actually if you want to chat, you can contact me at jade_swiftblade on yahoo messenger just about anytime.... And Despite my sugar high, I'm actually a pretty good conversationalist. I would love to chat with you! i'm officially one of your biggest fans BUT YOU HAVE TO FINISH THE STORY!!!!! lol.

Love, Jade

update ya?

hey, I love the story idea and I can't wait to find out what happens next in the story plot. But I think that you have some grammer that you need to look at, being (jet I think you mean yet,because a jet is an airplane, another example is weak and week, weak as in not strong and week as in the days of the week (sunday, monday,etc.) other then that there are some small spelling mistakes that can be fixed.) I'm sorry if this hurt your feelings, but maybe you should ask someone that can help you by reading it first and telling you your mistakes or ask for a beta. I hope that you'll continue your story it is most entertaining to read.

I don't usally review......actually you are the third person who made me give opinons.and this is so adorable....really a nice fic.........just update faster it's hard to waite but definetly worth to do so.......