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Oi... Poor Joey. -Clings to Jou plushie.- Hirutani is going to rape him! Dx Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

great chapter.........this is going to be one long story..judt don't seperate them again..not now..make it deeper and then hit the spot in time......I just don't want to see jou and seto hurt but I can't help it you write it really painful it almost hurts..my stomach clinches with every line ......plz update faster........love kisa

I like the story thus far...very interesting I am looking forward to the next chapters and am keeping track

Whoo! Keep it up! =3

ok u do no yugi had the puzzle and bakura had the ring right!?

ahhhhhhhhhhh.....it was so romantic.....couldn't you let them be in the bathroom and go alittle more further yugi could waite outside and listen.........(I"m such a pervert right?) and this noah of yours I though he's gonna destroy seto and jou's relationship can't see why you made mokie he's target.oh well you can't guss everythging can you?...so let's see what you do...and plz update faster update at least 2 times a week ....and write more stories I know people are busy and all but youre good and I think you should take this more seruisly.......love ....kisa

it seems a little strange to me, ryou having the puzzle and yugo haveing the ring.

ZOMG!!! Hooray Kaiba and Joey are together again! Or are they?! Dun Dun Dun DUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AMAZINGLY AWESOME!

You realize that you gave Yugi the millenium ring? Was that on purpose. I always thought Yami would've made a much better tomb-robber that Bakura, but aw well... got seto and jou! yay!

Please write more

Yami Kuro

awsome, wow that was cold, i love how you have written noah into the story, this is gonna get good