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by tavia454

schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Love you! Love this story! More please?
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!!!!!! That was great! Can't wait for the next update!
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really love this.
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*still squealing* LEMON! And it did NOT suck, stop putting yourself down like that. I liked it, though it's too bad Yuugi can't even remember it... Oh well, it'll come. I'll let this one slip cuz I'm in a good mood and you put in a good lemon XD

Hmm.. Yuugi should be getting more suspicious now. Than again, with the number of pges you said you'd already writen I doubt we'll get to see Atemu's world again any time soon... Either that or you're going to seriously freak Yuugi out and do it nyway. Well can't wait to read the next chap and now I'm off to answer that mail of yours.

Moony
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so need an update soon. I'll cry if I don't get one...don't make me cry, it could get ugly. I really like these AU. I mean many have it to where the yamis and their lights are on opposites sides but nothing like this. Please keep working on this.
person cinque
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeahhh, finally some action with these two
like it
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*mouth drops open as incoherent sounds come out* You... They... But... YOU STOPPED IT BEFORE THE LEMON?!?!?!?!?!?! *half screams in frustration* Oh come ON! Even I wasn't that cruel in my fic! And lemme guess, now you're gong to either cut the lemon out and go straight to the morning after, or you're going to let Yuugi come to his senses or someone interrupts them so the sex won't even happen? Seriously, do that and I think I'll die... which means no more updates from me (hint hint)

*sighs* Well, it can't be helped right now so just update soon! PLEASE!

Moony
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whahha, tavi!

very nice^^ like the story very much, thank you for sharing so quicky^^
will ya update soon?

L.Meh
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Yuugi, he sure is getting a lot of grief. I hope it will get better for him.
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I think Atemu is getting there with Yuugi. This is getting really good.