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by tavia454

schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute ending. So Yugi is the one who got 'caught' I'm glad Atemu came back to his senses and took what he rightfully owned. I loved it.
person cosmic clown
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww a really cute ending, I'm glad Atemu came to his senses about Yugi. Shame we won't see his reaction to the baby but we can all come to our own conclusion about it.
person YaoiLover16
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap... I can't wait for your next story! This was awsome! ^^ Jou and Yuugi pregnant? KYAAA!!! ^^ If you could e-mail me when the next one comes out, I'd be very happy! Thanks!

YL16
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOoooo! Cliffy!!! I feel so lonely....more please...
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Atem is starting to take the hint. I hope he does what he should. Good chapter.
I don't think Yugi is meant to be the seme. Maybe they both can carry children. Really great
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHH! Could this be the dominant Yami? AHHHH what a horrible cliffy! You are so evil Good chapter though, can't wait for the next update!
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That... was just plain EVIL. It's still no fun if other's make the cliffies and I don't *sulks* Lemme guess, that's the evil dude and not Atemu *sighs* yup, evil. This has officially sealed your fate for now I will keep calling you KAIBA! I dunno what this has to do with tht new nickname, but I'll think of something for that. *nods* uh-huh.

Well, except for the cliffhanger, it was a good chapter. Go Yuugi for shutting Atemu up! He really has to go back to normal... it's weird to see someone like Atemu like this.

Well, I should've been asleep for a quite a while but I couldn't resist reading this chapter. It was just too tempting. Well update soon!

Moony
person cosmic clown
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! did you have to leave it there? talk about a cliffhanger...I'm bungy jumping here!
Is Yugi gonna be safe [He'd better be] *Glares at Tavi* heheh update soon, please
person YaoiLover16
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC! This is awsome... and I started laughing when i was the review link, it said "Review For Me" as in the tittle, but it looks like you're telling us to review! That's so clever! Oh! And poor little Yuugi! mean old guy, who's name I can't spell... Seto's dad... now he's after Yuugi! Noo! But I hope you come out with more soon!

YL16
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job on the lemon. I was a bit suprised at the role reversal, but it fits with the story. Five thumbs up!