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for Lunch Break

by sprinklescake67

schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story! They were kinda OOC (seems more realistic when they're arguing), but it's cute when they're so loving. The most important part, the lemon, was very well written. Thanks for an awesome ficcy! ^_^
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job. It was ~Very~ sexy!
person Sammei
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! This was a good one! Nicely done, and I really like the ending. Great job!