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for ... And We All Have a Hell

by Paranoidcharlotte

schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that you must really continue this story. You could make a very interesting story. This chapter could make a great beginning. If you are planning at updating, please let me now by sending me a mail at: melodyz_07@hotmail.com
person maggiemay
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no no no...I am so sorry...I can't handle this. I am so so sorry, but you left out Jou's most redeeming quality...is heart. Even when mind-controlled he had heart. *cries* how could you DO that?

Maggiemay
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Jou seme! And an evil Jou stalker seme at that (you’re right, there isn’t enough Seto uke out there, there should be more). God did I love this. My only regret is that it’s only a one shot LOL If you ever consider doing a longer version of this, count on me to read it (God, I really hope you do LOL).

I enjoyed seeing the ‘sadist to caring lover’ changes in Jou, I think you managed that very well. I have always been fascinated when reading stalker fics, and I think Jou could get obsessed with Seto to the point of following his every more.

Oh! The bit of threatening a guy’s privates was priceless *claps* Very good indeed.

Great work dear, hope to see more of your writing soon!
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*glomp*

Thank you for the wonderful Jou/Seto rape story! (I sound awful... "Thank you for brutally traumatizing my favorite character, he really deserved that..." ) You should add chapters... Actually, I'm just saying that because I really loved it, but I don't think there's a whole lot more to add ^^. Anyway! Long live uke Seto!

( P.S.: If you're tired of seeing Seto be seme or jerk, read my stories. He's always uke. ^^ )