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for Spilt Perfume

by Tjay

person Anon
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was Malik? Well that makes more sence. I thought it was Yugi then Yami then I was like, 'Who the hell is it!?' XD
But darn, he would do it. D: Ryou... ;-;
person seto'swifey
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you may think that I am really stupid for this, but I didnt really get it. I understood that Bakura played Ryou, but what was his point? What exactly did he gain? This was really well put together though.
person Chelsea
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know that this was supposed to be a one shot, but honestly I would love to see where you would go with this in the future. I mean, I'm a pretty big fan of Bakura/Ryou, but even if it iddn't end up that way it seems that you could have killer story going here. Although, maybe that's what makes a good oneshot.