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Good chapter
I'm glad to see Asher and Yami together even if it with Seto.
Have fun at AKon.
After that I expect new chapter soon.

*whines* This is being updated very slowly! But!! ^-^ at least it's being updated~ So I won't complain. Another good chapter. YAY for Yami and Ahmose! Together again. ^-^ I can't wait for the next chapter~ Though I think it's about time I went back and re-read this one from the begining because i've forgotten a few things. (that and it's a fun fanfic that deserves to be re-read~)

Thank you so much for updating this wonderful fanfiction. Please do so at the next time convenient to you. You've done an excellent job with all of your stories.

It's nice that Yami and Ahmose got back together.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

Oh, noes!! I must await an update!!! RYOU!! come back.

What about Malik? If Seto gets a good eye on the elf.. shudder* This is an excellent series. i really hope you guys update.

If you had changed the sorcerer into a vampire, wouldn't he have lost his powers?

At least in whitewolf, mages lose most of their casting abilities.

Yami is such an A$$. LOL just blurts out everything. I'm so happy both brothers will be sired and sending out the entire party after Seto was just so obvious. LOL I'm stoked!! Great plan. I love this plot! You guys did a great job.

I don't know why I'll waste my poor typing skills on this rant because you probably wrote this an eternity ago. LOL

It's still ok!! Don't panic.. Baku and Makado can work..it's doable. Chill!! LOL

If you change your mind just have Makado rethink his desires at the Vatican and return there to be with Otigo. (duke) SPelling, sorry.

Then Bakura and Malik can rfediscover eachother when Malik loses his way in a storm trying to return to the outlaw city. lOL

I love that coupling. Above all else it's a solid story line. You can have trail and error pairings; it's all good.

I see why you panicked though. In the outlaw city, Malik and Baku had an exchange that left us wondering about the nature of their relationship. Later on they spend time and flirt. Bakura stated he was aware of Makado's crush but wouldn't take him; he's too young. And the final flaw that probably troubled you deeply; Malik belongs with Bakura. ROFL!!! Just messing with you.

I'm really enjoying how well you are developing the characters and not just rushing through this. It was sad when Yami died even though I never really liked him. LOL Well, not in Yugioh anyway.

Pegasus needs to be raped by a few Succubi all at the same time; he's such an A$$. LOL
I can't wait to see Malik hitch up with Bakura, I love that coupling. Actually I just love the Bakura's and Ishtar's period. LOL


I still can't believe they drove the entire party into Vatican City!!! It's like a group of newb low level adventures in an RPG!! Way to get the player party killed. LOL OMGosh that was dumb... RYOU!!! MALIK!!! Think!!! ROFL..

Well, otherwise they wouldn't all have clearance to be in the city, huh? Not to mention you had to get the group there for Yami, or you would have to waste time explaining what happened to everyone who didn't enter. LOL

Thanks for this fic, it really is a great read.

ch8

ahg1 Yami is the only one enjoying himself. Does Malik get better so he and bakura can get together????

Seto is such a bastard...poor Yami....